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Postby Nixit » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:25 am

:lol: At first, I thought you were going for a haiku there...
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Postby Nick » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:26 am

Isn't it? Did I do something wrong?

edit: Right, extra syllable on the last line. Sorry.
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Postby Pie » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:26 am

What? My spelling is brutal? What are you talking about? And whats a haiku?
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Postby Nixit » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:29 am

A haiku is a poem that goes:

1st line: 5 syllables
2nd line: 7 syllables
3rd line: 5 syllables


So actually Nick, you're still missing a syllable in the 2nd line. :P
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Postby Nick » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:30 am

No I'm not...

His = 1 syllable
grammar = 2
is = 1
horrible = 3

For a total of seven.
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Postby Pie » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:37 am

hmm

Nick, you are quite mean
and a mean, rude jerk, also.
you arn't helping me.

eh, i tried.
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Postby Sunni Daez » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:38 am

Too funny Nick... :lol:

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(EDIT: A true Haiku, has reference to the season)
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Postby Nick » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:39 am

Pie wrote:hmm

Nick, you are quite mean
and a mean, rude jerk, also.
you arn't helping me.

eh, i tried.
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ha. got it.


Mean twice, in the same sentence? As well as an 'and' and a 'also' in the same sentence? And you misspelled "aren't".
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Postby Sunni Daez » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:41 am

But he got the syllables correct
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Postby Pie » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:41 am

Pie wrote:eh, i tried


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Postby Sunni Daez » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:42 am

That you did
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Postby Darth_Tater » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:44 am

Garth said a hycooooooo in waynes world two in reference to when they was looking down on the staged basement and how it looked like there basement but wasnt actually there basement...nothing about seasons though
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Postby Nixit » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:45 am

Ah! You're right Nick! I guess I thought horrible had two syllables... silly me.
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Postby Pie » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:47 am

i personally don't like restrictions as such.
i like a poem with no rules, no bounderys witch to ceep us away
a poem with nothing holding it back.
although it test's the poets skills,
it is a hinderens nevertheless

i have a question, nevertheless?
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Postby Sunni Daez » Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:48 am

Cut and pasted info...


"Haiku is a Japanese verse form that relies on brevity and simplicity to convey its message. It is usually three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, and frequently includes natural images or themes. It is believed to have been first written in the seventeenth century and is based on a Zen Buddhist philosophy of simplicity and the idea of perfection that excludes the extraneous."
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