Take Turns Writing Story: Cantr Style
Moderators: Public Relations Department, Players Department
- Lone Wolf
- Posts: 385
- Joined: Tue Jan 13, 2004 8:55 am
- Location: Canada
"Aww, you brute" She yells trying to push him off. "oh I'm so..sorry" he replies embarassed. "why don't you watch where you are going" she snaps. "I said I'm sorry, what more can I say". She turns and walks away, "Nothing" she yells over her shoulder "just stay out of my way you are slowing me down". He says nothing, he just walks, following her.
Time goes by and she begins to regret snapping at him. She didn't mean to be so harsh. "Look" she turns to face him "I'm sorry. It's just that these are very hard time and I'm in a rush." She looks down "But I should not have snapped at you." He runs up and they continue walking.
"what did you mean by hard times?" he asks. She looks at him and then off to the horizon, trying to find the word "my...my family....."
Time goes by and she begins to regret snapping at him. She didn't mean to be so harsh. "Look" she turns to face him "I'm sorry. It's just that these are very hard time and I'm in a rush." She looks down "But I should not have snapped at you." He runs up and they continue walking.
"what did you mean by hard times?" he asks. She looks at him and then off to the horizon, trying to find the word "my...my family....."
Some are friends of the Wolf.....others are Dinner
- Bran-Muffin
- Posts: 2014
- Joined: Mon Feb 09, 2004 5:51 pm
- Location: California
*stays there for a moment to stunned to move, no mention of the joy he got from it, during the fall his arms went around her shoulders, after a moment of staying like that he slides his hands down to her chest and pushes off of her* s-sorry *smiles the same stupid smile once again*
Wasnt watching where i was going *chuckles to himself*
Wasnt watching where i was going *chuckles to himself*
- Psycho Pixie
- Posts: 716
- Joined: Tue Dec 02, 2003 2:40 am
- Location: Corona, like the drink, but not mexican
-
- Posts: 4649
- Joined: Mon Aug 25, 2003 5:23 pm
Psycho Pixie wrote:which thread shall we follow???? hmmm.....
Psycho Pixie wrote:They trudge on in silence, him eating noisily of the carrot and she quiet as a deer in the forest. And so they walk, and walk and walk....
then quite suddenly, He stumbles over and root in the dirt path and falls against her, his face planting into her chest.....
((This one))
...or would have, had she not smoothly pivoted on her heel and watched as he fell face-first past her onto the dirt path.
"Don't you even think about trying anything," she scowls at him as he brushes himself off.
"But I..."
"Don't be an idiot," she says. "You think after all these years I can't recognize an attempted attack when I see it? If you weren't so obviously incapable of doing me harm I wouldn't tolerate your presence at all.
Now let's get moving. As I've mentioned before, I have somewhere to be."
@PsPi...how in the hell would he fall forward into her chest if they were both walking the same direction? Doesn't make any sense.
I'm not dead; I'm dormant.
- Psycho Pixie
- Posts: 716
- Joined: Tue Dec 02, 2003 2:40 am
- Location: Corona, like the drink, but not mexican
[quote="|west|"
((This one))
...or would have, had she not smoothly pivoted on her heel and watched as he fell face-first past her onto the dirt path.
@PsPi...how in the hell would he fall forward into her chest if they were both walking the same direction? Doesn't make any sense.[/quote]
you would have to get all technical about it wouldnt you. so here....
he starts to fall from tripping over the root, what starts as a forward fall turns sidewaysas he over balances to catch himself, his arm catching her shoulder relfexivly, causing him to pivot as he falls, turning to slam his face right into her chest. deal with it!
PsPi
((This one))
...or would have, had she not smoothly pivoted on her heel and watched as he fell face-first past her onto the dirt path.
@PsPi...how in the hell would he fall forward into her chest if they were both walking the same direction? Doesn't make any sense.[/quote]
you would have to get all technical about it wouldnt you. so here....
he starts to fall from tripping over the root, what starts as a forward fall turns sidewaysas he over balances to catch himself, his arm catching her shoulder relfexivly, causing him to pivot as he falls, turning to slam his face right into her chest. deal with it!

PsPi
Here I am. BITE ME. or not, in fact, never mind, dont want some wacko taking me up on the offer. Only non wacko's may apply for bite allowance.. no garentee that you will be granted said allowance, but you can try.
- The Hunter
- Posts: 1470
- Joined: Sat Aug 16, 2003 12:59 pm
- Location: In my cave, making bombs.
- Contact:
- Sunni Daez
- Posts: 3645
- Joined: Sat Oct 16, 2004 1:33 pm
- Location: ~A blissful state of mind~
west wrote:((This one))
...or would have, had she not smoothly pivoted on her heel and watched as he fell face-first past her onto the dirt path.
"Don't you even think about trying anything," she scowls at him as he brushes himself off.
"But I..."
"Don't be an idiot," she says. "You think after all these years I can't recognize an attempted attack when I see it? If you weren't so obviously incapable of doing me harm I wouldn't tolerate your presence at all.
Now let's get moving. As I've mentioned before, I have somewhere to be."
"Where is it that you are going?" He asks eagerly "and why are you in such a hurry?" His feet moving faster than they had on his entire journey.
"I have things to deliver, in return, I will get things for my family" Looks at him trying to keep up with her pace and chuckles to herself.."I am in a hurry because my family needs me....Now just keep up if you wish to travel beside me"
He finds a stride to fit hers, and walks beside her, watching the path infront of them. Trees towering over thier heads, thier branches intertwining with each other. A canopy of green leaves now cover them. In awe of the beauty, he speaks without realizing it...."just so beautiful...."

Run...Dragon...Run!!!
- wichita
- Administrator Emeritus
- Posts: 4427
- Joined: Mon Jan 17, 2005 6:46 pm
- Location: Suomessa!
"Yes, Yes, I get it - you think I'm beautiful!" She rolls her eyes. "Is this going to be all we talk about as long as you are going to be following me?"
Embarrassed, he replies, "I was referring to the beauty of our surroundings..."
"Yes...nature is amazing," she replies with the same gruff attitude and roll of the eyes.
"Look, I'm sorry about the incident back there. I was starving, and going crazy in the cave. I haven't seen another human being in...well ever practically."
"Nice story." She looks him up and down quickly, the rainsoaked fur coat, the silk shirt, his weak thin frame..."Well from the looks of you, you might actually be telling the truth. Where the hell did you come from kid? And where'd you get that outfit...a dead body? Anyone with fashion taste that bad deserves to be dead." She notices the gold and ruby ring on his finger. "I'll trade you some food for that ring, maybe."
Embarrassed, he replies, "I was referring to the beauty of our surroundings..."
"Yes...nature is amazing," she replies with the same gruff attitude and roll of the eyes.
"Look, I'm sorry about the incident back there. I was starving, and going crazy in the cave. I haven't seen another human being in...well ever practically."
"Nice story." She looks him up and down quickly, the rainsoaked fur coat, the silk shirt, his weak thin frame..."Well from the looks of you, you might actually be telling the truth. Where the hell did you come from kid? And where'd you get that outfit...a dead body? Anyone with fashion taste that bad deserves to be dead." She notices the gold and ruby ring on his finger. "I'll trade you some food for that ring, maybe."
"Y-O-U! It's just two extra letters! Come on, people! This is the internet, not a barn!" --Kid President
- nitefyre
- Posts: 3528
- Joined: Sat Nov 22, 2003 3:29 am
- Location: New York City
- Contact:
He discovers the ring with her, despite it being on his finger all this time. 'How did it get here?' he wonders, curiousity tickling his lips as he attempts to speak. Only a muttered syllable escapes his throat, choking on his words. Choking on his memories. The ring unlocked the pandora box that his amnesia kept locked.
- Sunni Daez
- Posts: 3645
- Joined: Sat Oct 16, 2004 1:33 pm
- Location: ~A blissful state of mind~
Suddenly the visions of his past went swirling through his mind, visions of houses, roads, boats, a repeatedly a face. A face he could not quite see..just the eyes...the erie dark eyes...watching him with a cold stare...
"hey...HEY..are you alright?" she asked.
He shakes his head and comes back to the present, holding his hand infront of him, the ruby catches a ray of sun and glints.." I...I am fine." He pulls his hand back under the cloak "I cannot part with this ring....I am not sure why, but I just can't..."
"hey...HEY..are you alright?" she asked.
He shakes his head and comes back to the present, holding his hand infront of him, the ruby catches a ray of sun and glints.." I...I am fine." He pulls his hand back under the cloak "I cannot part with this ring....I am not sure why, but I just can't..."

Run...Dragon...Run!!!
-
- Posts: 1555
- Joined: Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:15 pm
- Nixit
- Posts: 2307
- Joined: Sun Nov 07, 2004 8:06 pm
- Location: Your imagination...
- wichita
- Administrator Emeritus
- Posts: 4427
- Joined: Mon Jan 17, 2005 6:46 pm
- Location: Suomessa!
"Fine. Suit yourself, " she says nonchalantly with a wave of the hand, "but you're going to have to give me something if you expect more food out of me. I'm not running a charity here."
They continue walking in silence for a while. The dark staring eyes of his vision continue to fill his mind, piercing his psyche through a thick haze. <i>Who is it?</i> -- he continues to wrack his brain, stirring the muddy swamp waters of his mind. <i>How did I come to the desert? Where was I before?</i> Suddenly the haze clears, the dark eyes rise out of the mist, borne in the skull of the corpse from which he collected the strange outfit he now wears. "Aaah!" He shrieks and jumps as he snaps back to reality.
They continue walking in silence for a while. The dark staring eyes of his vision continue to fill his mind, piercing his psyche through a thick haze. <i>Who is it?</i> -- he continues to wrack his brain, stirring the muddy swamp waters of his mind. <i>How did I come to the desert? Where was I before?</i> Suddenly the haze clears, the dark eyes rise out of the mist, borne in the skull of the corpse from which he collected the strange outfit he now wears. "Aaah!" He shrieks and jumps as he snaps back to reality.
"Y-O-U! It's just two extra letters! Come on, people! This is the internet, not a barn!" --Kid President
- Sunni Daez
- Posts: 3645
- Joined: Sat Oct 16, 2004 1:33 pm
- Location: ~A blissful state of mind~
"Boy..." she exclaims with frustration "what is your problem?
"I know who he was...The dead man in the desert...he was the one who..." His voice trails off and the visions continue to flood his mind. He recalls the cold eyes piercing him, like the cold when he first awoke.
"what dead man? What did he do? You aren't making any sence, boy" She continues walking without breaking her stride, intent on reaching her destination without haste.
He didn't hear what she said, his mind filled with confusion. 'how did he get the ring, why would she have given it to him?' he thought to himself. 'He was an evil man, he hurt and killed so many' The face of the man appeared on the boat..was it his boat? was it the evil mans boat?
"I know who he was...The dead man in the desert...he was the one who..." His voice trails off and the visions continue to flood his mind. He recalls the cold eyes piercing him, like the cold when he first awoke.
"what dead man? What did he do? You aren't making any sence, boy" She continues walking without breaking her stride, intent on reaching her destination without haste.
He didn't hear what she said, his mind filled with confusion. 'how did he get the ring, why would she have given it to him?' he thought to himself. 'He was an evil man, he hurt and killed so many' The face of the man appeared on the boat..was it his boat? was it the evil mans boat?

Run...Dragon...Run!!!
Return to “Non-Cantr-Related Discussion”
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest