Post Your Character's Last Day (4-day rule applies!)
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Re: Post Your Character's Last Day (4-day rule applies!)
Her last day wasn't anything worth posting, I don't think. There is another I might post though.
kronos wrote:like a nice trim is totally fine. short, neat. I don't want to be fighting through the forests of fangorn and expecting treebeard to come and show me the way in
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- Rebma
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Re: Post Your Character's Last Day (4-day rule applies!)
The one I wanted to post was too long. This one is long too, takes place over two days, but less than eight cantr hours.
Oh, and @Indigo: The one in question, woke up feeling sore and achy, and it amplified when she started swigging from her trusty flask. She stumbled her way inside-no one took much notice because she was often drunk and a little stumbly near the end, and actually they were all used to her having days where she felt ill, weak, coughy, headache, etc, which maybe you remember. Booze had been taking a toll on her body for years.. She was -as usual- denying that she was feeling ill at all to anyone who asked, and the last thing she did before she died was uncharacteristically cry out and double over in pain, and then cursed.
2981-0: You say: "*She smiles slightly, her eyes closing again. Her
smile fades when her eyes close, her brow creasing again*"
2981-0: Scarlet says: "Love you too. *smiles*"
2981-0: You say: "*She lets out a quiet sigh as her back is rubbed,
her brow creasing* Thanks.. *She mumbles weakly* Love..you..."
2981-0: Scarlet says: "It'll be alright...*she dabs her eyes with the
cloth, then begins rubbing her back*"
2981-0: You say: "*She whines quietly, her voice becoming audible
again* I don't.. feel.. good..*Tears form in her dazed eyes*"
2981-0: Scarlet says: "Shhh, go back to sleep, sweetie."
2981-0: You say: "*She mumbles something low and incoherant, her eyes
trying to focus on the person in front of her*"
2981-0: Scarlet says: "*she refreshes the cloth, placing it gently on
her head*"
2981-0: You say: "*Her eyes flutter open again at the touch, though
don't seem to focus*"
2981-0: Scarlet says: "*she strokes Jume's head gently*"
2981-0: You say: "*She sleeps fitfully on the cot, starting to toss
and turn*"
2980-7: Scarlet says: "*she looks to him, pleadingly*"
2980-7: Scarlet says: "Adam, would you go ask him what kind of
medical supplies he has?"
2980-7: Arthur says: "I'll be in the town if you need anything,
including medical supplies. It is a shame that our doctor also fell into
the Sleep *denies with the head*"
2980-7: Scarlet says: "They said we could start projects of up to ten
days on the machines. We could use the harvesters before we leave."
2980-7: Scarlet says: "We've eaten all of our asparagus."
2980-7: You see Scarlet entering Scarlet Fire, coming from Hold.
2980-7: You see some asparagus being pulled to Scarlet Fire, coming
from Hold.
2980-7: You see Scarlet leaving Scarlet Fire, entering Hold.
2980-7: You see Scarlet take some asparagus.
2980-7: You ate 51 grams of your grilled asparagus.
2980-7: <CANTR REPLACE NAME=char_a_man_in_his_thirties> says: "adios
arthur"
2980-7: You see a man in his thirties talking to a man in his
twenties.
2980-4: Scarlet says: "Yes, Jume, soon."
2980-4: You say: "*She sighs, and her eyes close again, though she
stays smiling* Soon then."
2980-4: Scarlet says: "I wish so too, but you need to rest, and I do
too."
2980-4: You say: "*Her smile grows even more, and she opens her eyes
again, her voice excited* I wish ..we could go now.."
2980-3: Scarlet says: "We can pretend to be Jumefish and Adamfish and
Scarletfish."
2980-3: You say: "*Her smile grows a bit*"
2980-3: Scarlet says: "Yes! We can swim."
2980-3: You say: "*She smiles weakly, nodding* Then we.. can swim."
2980-3: Scarlet says: "You'll be as right as a sunny day soon enough.
*she smiles and re-wets the rag, placing it again on Jume's forehead*"
2980-3: Scarlet says: "It's not your fault, ok? Don't fret, Jume."
2980-3: You say: "I'm .. sorry.. *She mumbles under her breath*"
2980-3: Scarlet says: "Oh, sweetie...I wish I knew what to do."
2980-3: You say: "*Her eyes flutter open for a brief moment as the
cool water touches her*"
2980-3: Scarlet gives you silk blindfold.
2980-3: Scarlet says: "*she pours some water into a bucket, and
dipping a cloth into it, rings it out and places it on Jume's head*"
2980-3: You see Scarlet take some water.
2980-3: You see Scarlet entering Scarlet Fire, coming from Hold.
2980-3: You see Scarlet leaving Scarlet Fire, entering Hold.
2980-3: You see Scarlet take a brand new wooden bucket.
2980-3: Scarlet says: "*she chews her fingers to the quick*"
2980-3: You say: "*She starts to sweat as she sleeps, a thin layer of
it coating her skin*"
2980-3: Scarlet says: "*gently caresses Jume's forehead and hair*"
2980-3: Adam says: "I know hun."
2980-3: Scarlet says: "*she releases Jumes hand, laying it gently
beside her* I'm not leaving her here by herself..."
2980-3: Adam says: "Mkay..*He nods a little, rubbing Scarlet's back
gently*"
2980-2: Scarlet says: "*she frowns and shakes her head* She doesn't
know. She just said she didn't feel good. I told her to rest."
2980-2: Adam says: "Oh no..*He moves over to them quickly, crouching
down before placing a hand on Scarlet's back, looking at Jume* What
symptoms?"
2980-2: Scarlet says: "*she looks up at Adam, her eyes full of
sadness and worry* She's sick, Adam."
2980-2: You see a man in his twenties talking to a man in his
thirties.
2980-2: Adam says: "*He walks up, looking concerned* Everything
okay.."
2980-2: You see Adam entering Scarlet Fire, coming from Kishnakotis
Yachthafen/Puerto.
2980-2: You see Scarlet drop some fresh dung.
2980-2: Scarlet gives you 62 grams of salted meat.
2980-2: Scarlet gives you 2240 grams of grilled asparagus.
2980-2: You see Scarlet take some grilled asparagus.
2980-1: Scarlet says: "*she nods* We call it the sleeping sickness.
*she turns back to Jume* She doesn't know what's wrong."
2980-1: Arthur says: "many people here has died trapped in their
dreams, and never has wake up. Although it is a common illness in the
newly spawned people, there have been cases where where those affected
were mature people. Most falls asleep, and rarely awake. Some lucky
people woke up many years later, but appeared to have changed. Others
have relapsed after a few days awake and hyperactive, for not to wake
again..."
2980-1: Scarlet says: "Trapped by the dream?"
2980-1: Arthur says: "Oh... sick as... trapped by the dream? or
...worse?"
2980-1: Scarlet says: "*she looks over at Arthur, her face clearly
upset* She says she's sick...*she bites her lip, very nearly ready to
cry, and turns back to Jume, holding onto her hand tightly*"
2980-1: Arthur says: "Something has happened? Scarlett? Jume?"
2980-1: Scarlet says to you: "I love you so much, Jume. You sleep
tight and get better, ok? I'll be right here."
2980-1: Scarlet says: "*she kisses her on the forehead*"
2980-1: You say: "*She seems to drift off slowly, her hold on
Scarlet's hand loosening, her breathing shallow and jagged*"
2980-1: Scarlet says: "Oh when I met yooooou, I was cra-zy, but you
filled my soul with liiiight. Now I'm sunniiiie and very haaapy, oh
please don't taaaake, my sun-shine awaaaay."
2980-1: You say: "*She smiles, relaxing, and pulls Scarlet's hand to
her cheek*"
2980-1: Scarlet says: "*she begins to sing quietly* You are my
sun-shine, my only sun-shine, you make me haaaapiiiiiiie, when skies are
graaaaaay. You never know deeear, how much I looooove you, please don't
taaaake, my sun-shine awaaaay."
2980-1: Scarlet says: "Ok. *she kisses Jume's hand* Ok. *her eyes
dart about while she thinks*"
2980-1: You say: "*She squeezes Scarlet's hand weakly, closing her
eyes as she nods* Kay.. I want a song.."
2980-1: Scarlet says: "If you need to sleep, you sleep, ok? I'll
stay right here with you. *she takes Jumes hand in hers* I can sing a
song, if you want. "
2980-1: You say: "I dunno. *She bites her lower lip, a tear spilling
from her eye* Maybe when I sleep then I won't feel not good."
2980-1: Scarlet says: "*she kneels next to the cot* Can I do anything
for you? *she gently strokes the side of Jume's face and hair*"
2980-1: You say: "*She sits first, then lays down, drawing her knees
up to herself. She tucks her hands underneath her head, looking up at
Scarlet with sad eyes*"
2980-1: Scarlet says: "Here, lie down...*she quickly clears some crap
off of the cot*"
2980-1: Scarlet says: "It's ok, Jumie, it's ok. We all get sick
sometimes."
2980-1: You enter Scarlet Fire, where you see 1 people, leaving
Kishnakotis Yachthafen/Puerto.
2980-1: You say: "*She sniffles quietly as she steps up* I'm sorry.."
2980-1: You see Scarlet leaving Kishnakotis Yachthafen/Puerto,
entering Scarlet Fire.
2980-1: Scarlet says: "Come on, hun, let me help you...*she takes
Jume around the waist and helps her onto the raker*"
2980-1: You enter Kishnakotis Yachthafen/Puerto, where you see 1
people, leaving the central area of Kishnakotis .
2980-1: You see Scarlet leaving the central area of Kishnakotis ,
entering Kishnakotis Yachthafen/Puerto.
2980-1: Scarlet says: "*she takes Jume's hand and walks her to the
harbor*"
2980-1: You say: "*She nods again, reaching for Scarlet's hand, her
lower lip quivering* 'Kay."
2980-1: Scarlet says: "Can you walk?"
2980-1: Scarlet says: "Ok, ok, come back to the ship, alright?"
2980-1: You say: "*She nods quickly, tears starting in her eyes* I
think so.."
2980-1: Scarlet says to you: "Do you need to lie down? "
2980-1: Scarlet says: "*she stands before Jume, one hand on her
shoulder as she runs the other through Jume's hair*"
2980-1: You say to Scarlet: "*She chews on her lip some more while
she thinks about it, her eyes wandering to the water* Uhm.. Not good
kind? *She looks back to Scarlet* "
2980-1: Scarlet says to you: "What kind of not good, Sweetie?"
2980-1: Scarlet says: "*her face grows concerned* "
2980-1: You say to Scarlet: "*She chews on her lower lip, her eyes
wide* I don't feel very good."
2980-1: Scarlet says to you: "What's up, Sweetie? *she smiles*"
2980-1: <CANTR REPLACE NAME=char_a_woman_in_her_twenties> says:
"Torito, te ayudo con el arroz *sonrأe*"
2980-1: You say to Scarlet: "Scarlet.. *She tugs gently on her arm*"
Oh, and @Indigo: The one in question, woke up feeling sore and achy, and it amplified when she started swigging from her trusty flask. She stumbled her way inside-no one took much notice because she was often drunk and a little stumbly near the end, and actually they were all used to her having days where she felt ill, weak, coughy, headache, etc, which maybe you remember. Booze had been taking a toll on her body for years.. She was -as usual- denying that she was feeling ill at all to anyone who asked, and the last thing she did before she died was uncharacteristically cry out and double over in pain, and then cursed.
kronos wrote:like a nice trim is totally fine. short, neat. I don't want to be fighting through the forests of fangorn and expecting treebeard to come and show me the way in
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Re: Post Your Character's Last Day (4-day rule applies!)
OMG
Did you play Jume??
Did you play Jume??
Someone wrote:Being dark is an intelligent interpretation of the fabricated world, made up from our heads, there to tempt and play with us
- Rebma
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Re: Post Your Character's Last Day (4-day rule applies!)
Yes, I did.
kronos wrote:like a nice trim is totally fine. short, neat. I don't want to be fighting through the forests of fangorn and expecting treebeard to come and show me the way in
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Re: Post Your Character's Last Day (4-day rule applies!)
One of my characters knew/knows most of the people mentioned in that one, Jume included. I was wondering where the boat ended up heading.
Edit: That is an impressive distance considering the time frame.
Edit: That is an impressive distance considering the time frame.
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