Where no one knows.
To find the space to free his mind,
Open up his heart and unwind.
Close the door and not look behind,
Hidde in a place hard to find.
To let out the feelings which have defined,
His life for over a week,
All his emotions have gone blind.
It makes him feel just a little bit better,
His hearts telling him to get her,
His minds telling him to forget her.
Like a rainy day, but getting wetter.
She loved him,
He never knew,
One day they will pass away,
Knowing that every day,
Seeing each other but not being able to say,
The three words that they could not find.
I would try to believe,
But think the feelings were put on to deceive,
To a place she goes,
To find a key of which she knows.
Frantically she searches, but to no avail,
A disgruntled sigh followed by a saddening wail,
The chance is gone,
For the time she waited was far too long.
The door in which a beloved decides to reside,
For eternity his feelings will hide
Yeah, so, I got bored, wrote this song or something of the sort. It's not finished or anything, well, I dont feel it's finished. I'd just like some input. Dont fear of critisizing me, well, I know you wouldn't anyway, you mean Cantr players will probably rip me apart anyway.
Anyway, any posts would be good. Thanks.
I am always appreciative of fellow poets and songwriters, or artists of any kind really.
