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Please stand. *hand on heart....head bowed*

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:14 pm
by Kreed
If tomorrow all the things were gone,
I’d worked for all my life.
And I had to start again,
with just my fur hat and bone knife.

I’d thank my lucky sheep,
to be livin here today.
‘ Cause the note still stands for freedom,
and they can’t take that away.

And I’m proud to be an Cantrian,
where at least I know its green.
And I wont forget the Cantrs who died,
who gave that right to me.

From the lakes of Olipifirovash,
to the hills of Sjoftich.
Across the barrens of Knatr,
From sea to shining sea.

From Cantr down to Baaak,
and Pok harbour to Alenz.
Well there's pride in every Cantrian heart,
and its time we stand and say.

That I’m proud to be an Cantrian,
where at least I know its green.
And I wont forget the Cantrs who died,
who gave that right to me.

And I gladly stand up,
next to you and defend her still today.
‘ Cause there ain’t no doubt I love this land,
Jos bless this green Cantr!

;)

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:58 pm
by colonel
*is speechless*

:D

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 4:05 pm
by Lumin
*claps* Great job!

Bored today? :D

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 4:07 pm
by Devil
It's just.. down right impressive...

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 8:55 pm
by El_Skwidd
w00t 8)

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 10:32 pm
by Savanik
I was fine up to the fourth verse, and then I sorta went:

From the lakes of ... Olip... mumble, mumble,
to the hills of ... S... j... mumble.


Sav

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 11:16 pm
by ChillFreeze
nice is all i got to say

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 11:33 pm
by HoH
Hmm. I heard a song eerily like this one on the radio this morning.

But it's among my favorites, so good job on converting it from an USA song to a Cantr song.

Re: Please stand. *hand on heart....head bowed*

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 12:32 am
by Bowser
Very creative new verses and I agree that Olipifirovash is a difficult word to have to sing. Don't take this personally, but I feel like nit-picking at the lyrics:


Kreed wrote:
Cause the note still stands for freedom,
and they can’t take that away.

What?!?!? Thats all they do with notes, They take all the notes and run away all the time.


Kreed wrote:
And I wont forget the Cantrs who died,
who gave that right to me.


Characters have no rights in Cantr unless the ruling authority decides you have rights.

Kreed wrote:
Well there's pride in every Cantrian heart,


Cantrians have never been proven to have a heart, but that is another debate.

;)

Re: Please stand. *hand on heart....head bowed*

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:13 am
by chadpants
Bowser wrote:Very creative new verses and I agree that Olipifirovash is a difficult word to have to sing. Don't take this personally, but I feel like nit-picking at the lyrics:


Kreed wrote:
Cause the note still stands for freedom,
and they can’t take that away.

What?!?!? Thats all they do with notes, They take all the notes and run away all the time.


Kreed wrote:
And I wont forget the Cantrs who died,
who gave that right to me.


Characters have no rights in Cantr unless the ruling authority decides you have rights.

Kreed wrote:
Well there's pride in every Cantrian heart,


Cantrians have never been proven to have a heart, but that is another debate.

;)


:roll:

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:17 am
by Pie
....... awe man..... I missed a debait.

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:52 am
by Devil
Heart attacks without a heart? I'd say it's proven that Cantr characters have hearts.

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:56 am
by Pie
STOP DEBAITING WITHOUT ME!!!

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 4:28 am
by Leo Luncid
Well, go debate then, Pie. I'm just saying that so that you'll know I'm not ignoring you.

Well, I think characters in the gaming world do not know that they actually have a heart, unless they either could feel the beats in their chest or find a dead one inside a body. But enough of that, I guess.

Yeah, great poem Kreed. You could be the next Shake-the-spear in the world of Cantr. :lol: Yeah, if you don't know his great works, I meant Shakespeare, but Shake-the-spear could be a variation inside the game or something.

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:01 am
by Nick
Devil wrote:Heart attacks without a heart? I'd say it's proven that Cantr characters have hearts.


Touche.